A Flower Falls

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A flower falls
from between the pages
of this Moleskine journal
pressed there to preserve
memories of a forgotten summer day
my mind seeks that motor-memory
of bending down to pick a wildflower
And there it is! Ah!
Sunrise at the coast
chilly salt-scented breeze flavouring my lips
sand in my Keens, bending to remove them
a patch of grass sprouting tiny flowers, one
pressed between the pages
of this Moleskine journal
from which, on this day
A flower falls

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 5 years ago

this is beautiful... :'-)

AnonymousAnonymousabout 17 years ago
Words-voice -- twins

Beautiful words voiced as if you recorded it on the spot that day. Thanks. Michael

duddle146duddle146over 17 years ago
Sweetly Evocative!

Such full rich images make this rendering something very special. I loved the way the lines fall so appropriately ~ just right. Beautiful Experience!

LeBrozLeBrozover 17 years ago
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A nice moment painted in words

All tied together for the then and now.

AnonymousAnonymousover 18 years ago
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I like the circular nature of this poem. Welcome!

~annaswirls