- Erotic Poetry
- Ecstasy
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i)
Can you hear the sound,
Sense the rain of stars
That burst upon the senses,
Fireworks of the soul’s
Brief ecstasy?
ii)
Do you know the weight,
Sense the pull of lips
That close within the circle,
Thunder of the soul’s
Full ecstasy?
iii)
Will you feel my soul,
Touch the pulse of blood
That moves, like melted chocolate
Charging of the soul’s
Wild ecstasy?
- COMMENTS
KOLKOREabout 16 years ago1201 I'll fight for your reputation on any forum (with my admittedly limited capacity) just because of the risks you were taking here! Just teasing... <P>
As for me, I would use the principle of 'quality over quantity' in sort of a lopsided way and say that just for the first stanza, which gave me as you put it : a "Brief ectasy", I would give it top rating.
twelveooneabout 16 years agoI really don't know how I feel about this, but since so many others were piss poor, and this one isn't, I'll go out on a limb and risk my reputation of not being a nice guy and leave 100. Sorry I couldn't be of more help.
