How to Ruin A Good Story

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BlueDaisy
BlueDaisy
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Many tim I open a storie on literotica settle down in my chair and get ready to transported to my own little fantasyland.

The title may be catchy prommising to be a very nice arousing story. I have hi hopes for a enjoyabl fwe minuets of reading. Then I began to read. Often I consider stoping in midstory but usualy perseveer becuase I want to see how the story turns out.

A wonderful unique storie can so easily be spoiled because the author has not bothered to prooffread, use a spellchecking program and/or have someone edit the story. It is very annoying to try to read a store that is full of errors: mispellings, incorrect grammer useage and misplaced and missused punctuation marks.

I have given a lower rateing than I would like to for a particular story, because of the reasons listed above. A story which I ordinarily would rate 5 for the storie isself might recieve 2 or 3 points lower from me, simply because the author didn't make the effort to assure that his or her story was properly proof read and edited.

I am not claiming to be perfect. Im sure that pllenty of errors can be found in my storys...including this peice, even though I proofread them, and run them through the spllchecker at least twice. Of course, spell checking programs are not fool-proof, but they do help! It just But it bothers me to see such blatent misstakes. It appears as though the author is more intersted in churning out stiries instead of submmitting quality erotica.

If an author does not care enuogh to check for and correct obveous errors, why should I bother to reed his or her work? I don't want to sound pompous or bitchy; I just want for people to make an effort in their writing so that they can produce the best storys possible.

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OK...enough of that. I think you get the idea, if you have read this far. What I just typed may seem like a major exaggeration, but it isn't far from the truth for some stories I've read here.

Some works just have a few minor typographical errors, which isn’t really so bad. But some of the stories are full of mistakes of almost every kind.

Trying to read a story that has such errors, many of which are glaringly obvious, is very difficult. Mistakes like those break the “flow” of reading, which is distracting. It makes it hard to keep up with the action in the story.

My plea to authors is this: Please check your work. If you are not sure that you can do it on your own, please make use of one of the volunteer editors that offer their services for you on Literotica.

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The corrected version:

Many times I open a story on Literotica, settle down in my chair, and get ready to be transported to my own little fantasyland.

The title may be catchy, promising to be a very nice, arousing story. I have high hopes for an enjoyable few minutes of reading. Then I begin to read. Often, I consider stopping in mid-story, but usually persevere because I want to see how the story turns out.

A wonderful, unique story can so easily be spoiled because the author has not bothered to proofread, use a spell-checking program, and/or have someone edit the story. It is very annoying to try to read a story that is full of errors: misspellings, incorrect grammar usage and misplaced and misused punctuation marks.

I have given a lower rating than I would like to for a particular story, because of the reasons listed above. A story which I ordinarily would rate "5" for the story itself, might receive 2 or 3 points lower from me, simply because the author didn't make the effort to assure that his or her story was properly proofread and edited.

I am not claiming to be perfect. I'm sure that plenty of errors can be found in my stories...including this piece, even though I proofread them, and run them through the spellchecker at least twice. Of course, spell-checking programs are not foolproof, but they do help! It just bothers me to see such blatant mistakes. It appears as though the author is more interested in churning out stories instead of submitting quality erotica.

If an author does not care enough to check for and correct obvious errors, why should I bother to read his or her work? I don't want to sound pompous or bitchy; I just want people to make an effort in their writing so that they can produce the best stories possible.

BlueDaisy
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DarkAurther6969DarkAurther6969about 2 years ago

Agreed 100000% it's the exact same with me, I mean hard is it to stop and proofread and use the Grammarchecker if Necessary. Hell that's what I do and I'm writing for personal enjoyment not by choice mind you. One or two I could maybe Handle but not when it's almost every Sentence, then it's like have you people ever heard of a Spellchecker or a Dictionary? Anyways as soon as I see way too many Grammar Errors that is when I leave your Story I don't care how 'Hot' it is or how 'In To It I Am' as soon as I see too many Grammar Errors that is when I Quit and Leave. My Only Exception to this is Dialog and How and What the Characters Are Saying for example "Ya'll Must Be Joken I Ain't that Kind of Gal" or "Wha....what's going on? Wha....Where...am...I? An And Who who Are yu You?" Etc....... And the only exception of this for me is when Character or Characters are having Sex. With Those I Personally Tend to Give those A Pass.

2052Dreams2052Dreamsabout 18 years ago
This was simply great.

I loved this. Funny as hell and a great way to make your point.

BlueDaisyBlueDaisyover 18 years agoAuthor
OK...ONE MORE TIME!!!

Thanks of those of you who "got" THE "TONGUE-IN-CHEEK" message of this story.

For those of you, who usually write anonymously (as is your right), please read the whole piece before you decide I can't take my own advice. It is a PARODY, folks. If you read one or two sentences, you just aren't gonna "get it". Do you know what "parody" means"? If you don't, I recommend dictionary.com. If you would like to leave a contact address, I'd love to discuss the topic with you. I am as polite in my reply letters to those who like my stories as I am to those who don't.

I don't admit to perfection. I know I have errors that miss my multi-proofreadings and spell-checks. But come on...have a bit of sense of HUMOR, please.

But, thanks for reading, anyway.

Blue

GeorgepatGeorgepatalmost 19 years ago
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Hi,

I read with great intrest, your "How To" guide that you were kind enough to write and post.

Thanks, I've learned from you...and I won't forget it

Thanks,

Georgepat

AnonymousAnonymousabout 19 years ago
Blind

Either those that responds to this threads were blind or that I am seeing things. There were so many spelling mistakes that I could hardly finish through. Talk about ruining a good story. Bleh

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