- Erotic Poetry
- I Like Your Body
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I like my body when it is with yours
I like the warm
Under you.
Its sculpted form
The seasoned
Firm-smoothness of it
Muscles better and nerves more.
I like your body
What it does
Its how’s and ways
Like it does under feathery tips
I like kissing this and that of you,
Slowly licking the what it is that comes
Over my parting flesh.
And eyes… fiery love charms looking back
I like what my body does with yours
Raw electric madness
Spilling over
And perhaps the thrill of you quite new
- COMMENTS
LeBrozover 18 years agoSack's idea seems sound;
A bit of editing to tighten this up
Would really give more "omph" to your words.
sackover 18 years agoIf you worked to eliminate the seven "it or its" as well as "this" or "that". Why not say exactly what on his body appeals to you? Also, did you mean hows and whys? "Ways" doesn't fit as well?
