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Click hereI want to be held tightly throughout the night
And sleep to the rhythmic rise and fall of his chest
His warm tender breath
Dewey as it caresses my neck
I want know man’s desire against my lower back
And listen to his gentle moans
When I push against his growing sex
Reaffirming our mutual need for physical intimacy
I long for the day when limbs entwine,
And senses heighten
Causing juices to flow with anticipation
As fingertips dance on burning flesh
Until our bodies scream at each other
Breaking the silence without a sound
I think "Dewey" is actually a name, were you thinking of "dewy"? The only other part I might change is "man's desire"...how about "his desire" to make it more individual and personal?
...you speak of the growing desire and the anticipation, and focus on the buildup. It is all too tempting to leave those times unspoken, yet they are often more intense then they're release.
reminded me of some personal memories
of the more wholesome kind,
where love found erotic and coexisted,
This is hotly erotic without the all-too frequent "nasties". Thank you.
Tess