The Diurnal Animal

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Written by wildsweetone
Illustrated by tolyk

Where do they go each night?

these diurnal beings in
heavy metal vehicles
rumbling through car parks

              and
              streets
              in
              search
              of
              ?

travelling                                         alone

or in
Bunches

                                        By-passing
                                         turnoffs

Driving through traffic
travelling home

or

returning to a                                   lost
                                                      moment

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tazz317tazz317about 12 years ago
THIS ANIMAL

called TRAFFIC. TK U MLJ LV NV

LeBrozLeBrozabout 17 years ago
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These creatures of the day, for what do they search at night? Or have they found it and are now going to their burrows to slumber - eventually?

LeBrozLeBrozabout 17 years ago
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These creatures of the day, for what do they search at night? Or have they found it and are now going to their burrows to slumber - eventually?

duddle146duddle146over 17 years ago
Exquisite.

A lovely nocturnal photo that assists immeasurably in telling the story. This rendering had an interesting format.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 19 years ago
Clever...

...the spacing of the words has the feeling of traffic weaving in and out. Well worth reading. Kudos to both!

Tess

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