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Click hereFor long have I lived underground,
my chrism came through you,
lost within a sot's sortilege,
you drag me on in lieu,
understand that you can have me,
no need for ruth nor rue,
vaunt frivolously before me,
your lips prove you are through
What an interesting poem! I too read it several times and it is a terrific read aloud. I always advocate the poet doing that and the reader as well. It is fun to hear how people incorporate devices into their work that is often missed when not read aloud. Good work, a solid five.
~ maria
comment to bulltlr, good job, and any new writers that visit, focus on the sound.
drunkard's magical pull on emotion, drag someone toward cataclysm instead of letting go, you can speak and perform but lips prove...
Thanks for reading, Bullitr
I read, reread and took it all apart... looking up words I did not know or understand... baffled and wondering what its really all about!
Would you be willing to explain? Please...