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Click hereFrustrated
at the kitchen table,
doing mundane inane tasks
bills, bills, and books,
I felt a hello,
a serpentine around
and through ankles.
I'll tell ya
I don't know if I believe
in ghosts, or angels
but for a moment there,
I forgot you were gone
and called out your name.
I wish I could feel Nick and Sophie like this. It made me cry. I have no problems with your poem, it is perfect to me. My hubby even loved it. :)
you know I ain't no gaddam grammer queen, check with them. But the whole argument can be avoided by changing "a" to "so"; get's an added s sound.
......this sweet, sad poem. Good to be able to read you once more, Neo.
Tess +5