A really wonderful, caring story. Thank you.
It my kind of story keep up the good work.Want to see a lot more.
A good one
Touching, wonderful and heart breaking at once, it does give hope though!
This story sounded like Joe Friday talking - "The facts Ma'am, just the facts." Every thing was cut and dried. I did this, she did that, we did this and bingo we're back together. Not enough background information to make this story very interesting.
But HELL NO! For a smart guy he has to be the dumbest man on the planet. When she asked him to father a child for her his answer was NO! As a lawyer he understood all the implications. There's no way in hell he would have agreed to father a child with her. NO WAY! Even for fiction this has to be the dumbest story ever. Just awful. No stars.
Sure it has a happy ending, but I'm pretty sure neither character deserves it.
Honestly it would have been a better story if he'd moved on, found another smart woman he could love and left her to her fate. Maybe I'd have had more sympathy for her if she'd objected to his career choice early in their relationship...
I thought these people were described as intelligent?
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