All Comments on 'The Sibling Diaries Ch. 05 Pt. 02'

It's been a year for Christ's sake! Finish this thing already! You've written other stories since then. So, you obviously have time. It's not fair to leave us all with blue balls like this!

Every orgasm, every consummation in this story is just another phase in the building, and building expectations and arousal for some final crescendo, some enormous release that will explode beyond anything experienced thus far. Even the intensity of my orgasms have increased as I travel through this story. This surprises me. I am also surprised how, in spite of my age and poor health, I am able to get hard so soon after the last orgasm and orgasm again in the same session. This is such a perverted, lust-drenched, tenderly-told story that I can't help masturbating for hours while reading it, reading slowly and edging in ecstasy for hours on end. Please write that grand finally or is the idea that we have to create that final chapter for ourselves after being stimulated so mercilessly. Both of you write amazingly.

so well written and extremely erotic. You have some serious talent! Thanks.

You and Judo have written a wonderful story. However, I was very disappointed in how short chapter 6 was. I went looking for chapter 7, but can not find it. Have you two given up on writing the conclusion? I don't know how many people have read the entire chain, but you're disappointing your readers by not finishing it!

Literary merit? You're shiting me! How many times can you use"slippery" in one story? Get a thesaurus

As of last December, at least, you finally wrote another story after so many years we were afraid you died on us. So how about finishing your masterpiece here??? I think your fans deserve an ending. Some of us have come back to check your page every week or so for some 8 years looking for a final chapter. PLEASE!!!!

This entire series is one of the best I've ever read, period

niiice awesome

Wow, somebody needs to finish this story! Way too much hanging out there. Tommy, the hot boss at work, EROS Club, the wedding, come on!