All Comments on 'First Day Of School'

It takes time to produce quality, either in making love or writting about making love. Thank you for the pleasure of your work.

DELICIOUS, simply breath-taking...

satisfying.

complete.

great episode.

topic is not unique, yet the experience is.

kudos & congratulations.

This was a purely delightful story! As always with a story of this quality, I'm disappointed to see it end. I'd love to read more of their relationship, especially how they resolve any morning-after discomfort, and living in the smaller community of the school... well, I guess that begins to be a book length short story.

Thanks for a fun read.

it was a truly wonderful story.. attention to detail was excellent bringing a storm into it with darkness and candles..so beautiful..a perfect scenario for any first-time woman in this situation..cant wait to read the next bit...thankyou

You took way to long to get to the point of the story. The way you were jumpihng back and forth from there fantasies was confusing. I couldn't fig out if they were masterbating or really with each other. Aslo how you would just jump into lisa point of view I couldn't fig out how chris was in her own house tellig the story and in lisa's bed.

I love this story. You know what it reminds me of? If you've seen the movie "Snatch", the scene where all the characters are driving in different cars, and the focus keeps on switching between Turkish and Tommy, Tony and Cousin Avi, and Vincent and Sol. Where everything happens out of time and it doesn't make sense for a while, and then all of a sudden it all makes perfect sense. This story reminds me of that. For a while, the sequence of events doesn't follow, but then you understand what's going on. I love it. A nice way to write a story differently from the norm. Excellent!

Your story was pretty good, but i just have one piece of advice for you...if you're going to be in first person with one character (in this case, "Chris") then don't try to get into the other character's mind too (in this case, the way you kept saying that "The first indication to Lisa that she was excited about having me over was..." or "Lisa knew she was ready for me when..."). It tends to make things confusing. Just stick to one character and the story will make more sense. Otherwise, great job!

wonderful. absolutely wonderful. So good that you're the first person I've put on my "favorites"

The absolute best story I have read at this site in three years. Fantastic! Romantic, erotic, sexy, interesting plot, beautifully described sex. Amazing. Keep writing and I will keep masturbating. I have never been so wet without a partner. Loved it!!

- Dana

Everyone's already said all the good things I want to; if you do want to switch between characters, set off the second character some how (elipses, italics, whatever); the length was perfect - this wasn't a wham-bam-thank you ma'am, it was a really good seduction and you played it out perfectly; anticipation makes the result even better, more fulfilling.

Hope to see more.

this is one of the best storys on this site if u ever do anything else i want to read it its great

Another perfectly good romantic story ruined by the introduction of a fake dick! I read lesbian stories because I love women, not men. If you'll take a fake dick, you'll take a real one and I want nothing to do with that. This site needs a bi-sexual story category where all these "dick" stories can be placed and leave the lesbian category for stories about women loving women, not women with dicks.

Wow...I'm speechless. You brought both characters to life. I loved it! The sex was incredible. But more than that, you set the scene and increased the tension from there!! I love that! And now may I ask, is there a sequel or will you write one? Thank you!!

Hot!! I always wondered what my teachers did at night!! ;) 29/f

Im training to become a teacher, this story resembles a few thoughts i've had on some fellow teachers. Perfect, romantic, sexy and timeless.. i doubt this is the last time I will read this. Thanks. :)

The long buildup to lovemaking is understandable to establish the tone. The author could then have gone on for pages and pages describing their lovemaking. (Having Lisa give an expensive gift to Chris was unnecessary, and suggests that the older teacher's motives might have been partially predatory. It would have been more appropriate for gifts to be given after they made love, as a sign of their continuing relationship.) That these two women in a small place found each other after experiencing times of aloneness and dissatisfaction should be enough to justify the attraction. Neither one need have a goddess-like figure, nor should they want or require a dildo to make their coupling complete. I ask the author to keep exploring this relationship and describing it in further installments.

That was agood sensitive story. Thanks and can we have more please

Have Lisa use the candles on Chris. Lesbian waxplay is hot! (No pun intended!) LOL!

Other than the fact we love this story. When are you going to write more chapters?

I LOVEEEEEEEEEEEEEE THIS STORY PLZ DONT STOP

Very nice story... Kept me squirming in my seat anticipating when "it" would happen. I'm so glad it ended with her in a submissive position...

Amber

That was one of the hottest stories I've seen here.

Everything has been said. A great story, told perfectly. A turn on from the start with a high that doesn't end. Thank you for your efforts and and bringing this tale to life. I look forward to whatever comes next!

Mmmmm . . . such a delicious narrative --- just the right mix of scene, plot, action (and, oh, my, what lovely action!).

Please do continue your tales about Chris and her recently awakened lust for 1) senstive, experienced female lovers eager to mentor young women in how to receive exquisite sexual satisfaction, 2) toys or other divertissements meant to intensify any of the multitude of female pleasure sensations, 3) a surrender of control and all it means in terms of entrusting her own pleasure to someone else, and then --- are we this lucky? --- 4) her continued exploration of new ways to satisfy all of her sexual desires.

Lovely writing.

Nicely done!

I didn't want this to end. I had put on a Thunderstorm track from my iTunes while reading this story and it was like I was a ghost quitely watching in the room. Seriously I am so wet that my eyes are watering with complete desire.

Perfect. And I loved the plot.

Please continue this lovely story.. Do they fall in love? Do they get married? Do they make it last? Does the sex stay great? Maybe just because I'm Chris too, and a lesbian, it really hit me hard. I've read it at least ten times. I don't think I've ever had orgasms to rival Chris Spivey, but maybe I just haven't found my Lisa yet. My first experience was more a relief to have finally done it than a multi-orgasmic trip. MORE PLEASE

truly amazing and i LOVE LOVE your writing you should really do this professionally!!

Gd story..write more....I like....Hemmmm,,Makes me want to write about my dream my first time with a woman...

First off, I'm a mature Bi male, but I just love reading lesbian stories, especially ones like this that are so well written. It's definitely like being there, it's so vivid and may I say very romantic, I just couldn't stop reading till I finished it all, and oh! It so turned me on like you wouldn't believe. Congratulations eroslit and I hope there's many more of your stories to read on here. Colinxxx

The writing was absolutely great! An idea for you is to incorporate an young 12th grade girl with Lisa and Chris in a Lesbian threesome!

Damn that was such a turn on, you're such a great writer, very vivid and descriptive.... More please!

Keep writing and I will continue to keep masturbating my wet wet spot. I NEED TO CUM

CUM

Cum.

Thanks

I loved how you tried to bring the thoughts of both characters into the story. Very difficult to do and not make it so confusing. Good job! Hope to read more of your stories.

I loved the story and how do I know because my wetness told me so.I have to stop so I can cum again. Keep it Cummings.

What a wonderful story - it took me back to my first experience with a man which led into a long affair. - transvestite Joanna

Had 3 reading this! Great...

Wonderful story of two females finding out how good sex can be with each other. I ranked this story as one of the best ones on your site. It made my pussy wet from just reading about how they got together. When Lisa tied up Chris to the bed I couldn't help but masturbate because this is a fantasy of mine to be tied up and be dominated.

Keep on writing about these two teachers. I look forward to reading more about them.

LOL. Janine

This was truly one of the best stories of gentle seduction, love and lust that I have had the pleasure to read. Absolutely wonderful!! Hope to see and read more!! Well done. "HOT, HOT, HOT"!!

deserves a sequel. The activities between these two school teachers was extremely erotic. It seems they had so much fun together that they will want to get together again--and I'd like to read about that, too.

Great story.

This was ever so much more than a sex story you built up to the climax so slowly and very well. I ask is there a part 2 in the works, if not then I understand since you cannot really improve on such an amazing work of literature. Thank you for sharing

Wonderful story and beautifully written, it flowed along delightfully, one felt for the two women. Please write a sequal, we all want to know how things develop for Chris and Lisa.

I really enjoyed this, it would have been perfect story except the last page, I do not care for the part of her wrist being tied up, other than that it was pretty good

Beautiful I was so easily drawn into the journey that Chris departed on. 5☆'s

So very well written with such a slow build up, it was perfect!

Wow! More...? Please!!

It's an exploding pleasure upon reading this story. I felt it real good! Thank you so much. 5s🌟 of course!

I am not sure if the build up was the real orgasm or the ones that followed. Blew my mind .. more please !!!

( Very good , love it 5 🌟 s )

This is one of the best stories I have read here. So good!

Ohhh God.. That was AWESOME!!! I'm wondering.. How can they work together?! Damn!!!!!

This story showed a good understanding of pace, and built up well to the climax. Wish my teachers were like this when I was at school!

That was so sexy as hell!

Wonderful story - sexy AND well written!

A very very fine story. What characters! What writing! And what sensuous sex scenes!

Five stars. In addition to being a very erotic story, you captured perfectly the feeling a new teacher has when she steps in her classroom for the first time.

Wonderful build up to a powerful climax. Sorry, I couldn't resist.

Oh My, Beautiful story , brilliantly written. Very sexy and so seductive, there could be more to Chris' awakening, I would so hope so. Thank You Jennifer