All Comments on 'Treasure Beach for Three'

Amazing.... I enjoyed every moment of it.

My girl friend has promised me a 3 some if she can pick out the girl. Sounds even better to me now!

Super HOT. that really feeds a fantasy or four, LOL. Thank you for sharing your story.

It certainly sounds like you could. Best of luck and thanks for the comment!

-m&m

What a great couples story. Well written, great story, and everything "fit" nicely. Excuse the pun. I gave you a "5".

jd

That was hot. Well written and I could completely imagine myself there taking part in the threesome. I hope there will be another chapter. I can't wait to share this with my girl friend and her husband. We'll definetely have awesome sex after this!

It was a well written story that had me wishing I was in there as one of the three. Will have to read this story again with my love.

Well written with nice build-up, ratcheting up the eroticism. Smooth writing, very hot imagery. A tad more editing would have made it flawless, but I'm not one to talk about that...

I really enjoyed the way you painted sexy pictures here, describing the action in great detail and at the same time capturing the erotic vibe. Well done!

I came across this story as an entry for the April Fool's Day Contest, but then got so carried away with the story of Tom, Mala, and Alice that the ending caught not only Tom, but also me, by surprise. Good suspenseful writing and development of the characters make this story rise above most of the other stories.

Congrats on being a winner, masterandmargarita!

I have to agree with every thing everybody else had to say but will go one step further and say that my cock may never be the same after reading this series of fucks, sucks, and every other kind of sexual involvement that exists!!!!! The idea of spending time in a tropical paradise with two highly sexed, gorgeous, fuck-desiring, fuckworthy babes is enough to get anybody's undershorts filled with gooey cum without ever touching your cock!!!!!!!!!

FUCK!!!! this story is supercharged sex and my cock will never get over the abuse I gave it getting through it!!! Keep on writing these - you haven't warped everyone yet!!!!!

Wow wow wow

Very well written and erotically charged. You avoided the clumsy cliches that plague so many writers on this site. You portrayed Tom honestly as a man willing to please his mate but still inhibited with some insecurities.

And to you, who recognizes the craft-brewing prowess of northeast Ohio, I raise a glass of Dortmunder Gold.

More please. What happens next?

she should be in the running for wife of the year !

That was an amazing story - so hot, and I loved the twist at the end.

great story!

Loved every bit of it! What a surprise ending and what a great wife! I am going to have my wife read it maybe it will give her some ideas as we have talked about fantasies like this.

Hard almost the entire time. Nice!

Would love to find Mala at my holiday resort. My wife would be on cloud nine.

What a great story! I loved all of this....