All Comments on 'The Secret Formula Ch. 02'

Good job! Welcome back.

This is a great series and can't wait to see what Oak has up his sleeve. As far as Daphne goes she doesn't give one iota about Sheldon as long as she had a roof over her head and a unlimited spending line. Sheldon was so gullible that now with Oak she can have her cake and eat it also. Nice writing.

In part 1:

Oak says: "I'll tell you what. Sheldon is a little too drunk to stay. It seems like he might throw up. I'll drive you both home and get my car tomorrow. That way we can continue our conversation. Deal?" "Okay, deal" she said, happy to get to spend more time with Oak.

In part 2:

He lit upon the perfect idea, but was too tired to begin implementing it right this second. It was 3am and he'd just banged this dude's wife on and off for a good five hours. He ate his sandwich and said his goodbyes and told the two of them he'd see them soon and that he had some business to discuss with Sheldon later.

In part 1 they came out of the bedroom dressed and in part 2 Sheldon is looking at her naked and Oak in boxers. When did they strip?

DebbieX, please quote for me where it said they were dressed at the end of chapter 1. I can't find it and will correct it if that's the case.

Wished you'd write more. Your stories are a great read! I've enjoyed them all.

There was silence for what felt like an eternity. Just as Sheldon was about to knock in spite of his trepidation, the door opened and he was greeted by a smiling Oak and a positively glowing Daphne. Both were fully dressed.

"Hey buddy," Oak patted Sheldon on the back, "I treated Daphne with my Oak's Seed. Whadaya think?"

You're sick!! Get some help!!!

Just the kind of sick writing I like. The world needs more Daphnes.

Need chapter 3 asap!