All Comments on 'Unwelcome'

by Lucita

Sort by:
  • 3 Comments
AnonymousAnonymousabout 9 years ago
really

This whole thing pissed me off good story but I hate the uncle

AnonymousAnonymousabout 9 years ago
Wow...

Really dark but love it!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 9 years ago
Possible inconsistencies - Protagonist's intelligence?

The uncle is easy to hate and easy to imagine as a character. However, it was difficult to get attached to the 'protagonist' for me. It seemed conflicting that she should sound smart/intelligent in the very earliest part of the story and yet seem... less clever later on.

On a semi-related note, does it take a degree to become a librarian in England? I know in the states librarians in general require a degree. An assistant librarian would make more sense if so for her age and formal education. (That is assuming this is not an alternate Earth timeline, by which then go right ahead. I didn't catch specifically what era the setting was or what war specifically the story was referring to other than the "historical" tag.)

Anonymous
Our Comments Policy is available in the Lit FAQ
Post as:
Anonymous