by Hugo_S
You need to learn the difference between your and you're, you're is short for you are.
"You're cock was made for my ass" makes no sense, you should have used your instead.
Ha! My bad. I'm a stickler for that kind of thing myself so that's annoyed me.
Went south quickly after chapter 1.
Chapter 1 had a romantic feel, even though they could never be married legally.
Nothing kills that like anal and threesomes.
I liked it fine! Five Stars.
I really liked the series but I think it isn't a good idea to make the threesomes a reacurring thing. The stepmom and son should just go on with their new life with eachother in love.
Seriously fuck the whore all you want but seriously a 20 year old kid is going to marry a 34 year old woman? By the time she's 50 he's barely in his 30's 😂😂😂