All Comments on 'Brides Pt. 01'

How long till chapter 2? :)

Glad you're enjoying it! Hope to have more soon!

I can't wait for the rest of this story I loved it !

But I'm building an anthology of erotic stories about corruption and was wondering if you'd like to be featured on my website:

https://hallofcorruption.wordpress.com/

Don't hesitate to send me a message if you're interrested!

(hellofacritic@yahoo.fr)

Regards,

HoC

Ho C

Sure, feel free to link!

Your page has just been made. It might change with time as you add stories.

Tell me what you think ;-)

HoC

I've really enjoyed it The transformations are described well, and the atmosphere between scary and sexy is just a great fun to read .

And we can see this in your descriptions.

Your transformations are acutely described and I appreciate that.

Don't hesitate to develop the characters a bit before their corruptions. Give them specific physical and character traits and a situation (a family etc...)

A good beginning. I'd like to see more.

Great story. I need more

Please continue this

More of this, please, to keep us going

Finally. Thanks for your patience.