All Comments on 'BabySitter's Modesty'

by Ashson

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sirhugssirhugsabout 9 years ago
This one deserves Part 2

Mr. Ferdand needs a turn...but first, the Mrs?

AnonymousAnonymousabout 9 years ago
Spelling error

Even if your stories weren't almost all the same, they'd be identifiable by your misspelling of the word 'OFF.' You spell it 'OF' which spell check doesn't catch but it's very evident by the context.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 9 years ago
I Tried

Tried your stories but none of your characters are likeable enough to finish reading; their unrealistic behavior doesn't help any even if it is fiction. Agree w/ other commentor about your females being stupid etc. You clearly have issues w/ women if the re-occuring (rapey) pattern in your stories are any indication. I'll stick to stuff that doesn't insult my intelligence.

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