All Comments on 'Mother Watches'

I liked the story as voyeurism is a turn on for me as well as incest. As he didn't fuck his mom, though, I'm not sure that this is the correct category for this story. No incest really occurred. My thought is that it should have been listed in the exhibition/voyeurism category but that's just my opinion.

Enjoyed it as a start but if i dont cum its too short.

Keep it CFNM and keep it going.

Keep mom shy but increasingly naughty. Maybe mom has never wanted to be caught dead at a male strip show but they can help each other fulfill that fantasy. Can work towards mom getting a steady flow of protein until he returns to school

This is the start of a great story. Please don't let it end here.

This could be incest waiting to happen. Let the mom catch him sniffing her dirty panties. Then she will be embarrassed but then tease him about it that it must be musky, he would say that he loves her feminine intimate scent that makes him hard.

her her as he jerked off. But continue this please. You have the start of a great mom and son love affair.

Is there a boy anywhere who doesn't empathize with what Brett's doing? Maybe some scared over-conditioned wimps. But any normal healthy young guy will recognize himself in this kid's actions. Look, a young male is proud of what he's got swinging between his legs, just like Brett is. His fat young penis and his loaded hanging balls are his pride and joy. And he wants his mom to look at his male equipment, feast her eyes on it, show her admiration on her pretty face. The last time his mother saw his penis he was maybe 10 or so. He wants, make that aches, to show her how it's grown. A lot bigger than the last time you looked, isn't it, mom? I bet most every guy reading this has played games, like lying naked on top of the blanket, pretending to sleep, hoping mom would check on him and get a real eyeful of his good-looking cock. Or left the door a bit open while he's dressing, standing there naked as the day he was born, just in case mom comes in to fix the bed, or whatever. WIC is a brilliant writer. He (I'll take a wild guess) captures Brett's reaction perfectly. Knowing his mother is seeing everything he's got to show, he's dizzy with excitement, more excited than ever before in his life. He springs a huge hard on, adding to his thrill. Now his mother sees his cock in all its throbbing glory. Hey, mom, what do you think now? Your little boy's all grown up, right? Now watch this. And Brett jerks it and blows his balls all over the place. It's the biggest stream of semen he's ever shot, mom's so impressed she stands there open-mouthed. I deeply wish I'd done that with my own mother, and I bet every guy here wishes the same thing.

PLEASE..CONTINUE...

Part Deux better have some amazing fucking going on.

More length, less angst! No, wait... that's what she said about me!

Your writing is the best that I ever seen. You need to write books. That anonymous guy with the long letter. I always recognize your style, and though you are odd, your writng is very good. Why in hell arent you writing stories.

where's the story?

For many women it is a great thrill to have son jo for them

I loved when she did .

Thought I would come back and read more of your work. Your story was a fun and intriguing. I fancy my older sister's son looking out a window to see my short skirt rising up along the back of my thighs - me pretending to inspect the garden. It's a rainy night here, being all alone so you can see why a girl might be looking to you for some inspiration. I've always been well, very sexual. My older sister played a role in that as she once caught me and my best friends playing make-out during a sleep over. She taught Stacy and Pam how to French kiss and well ... other things too. Thanks for letting me share, my rabbit is working me towards a series of small warm orgasims. The only issue now is which fantasy? Lying back on the bed surrendering to my nephew or the memory of crawling across the floor to my sister's bed.

To Love: if you read this comment, i would like to role play / Chat with you.

Email me @: nicholas.parents@outlook.com

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loved the story,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,

Had the realistic side to it many lack. Many mothers look at their son but are afraid to admit it's on purpose. This is true love.