All Comments on 'Anna from Next Door'

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 9 years ago
No story

No story - not believable

AnonymousAnonymousabout 9 years ago
Oh dear

Unfortunately I lasted less than 1/4 way. Reads like it was written by a pre-pube boy from how he imagines porn to be written.

Would never say anyone should give cup on writing but certainly plan and get someone to read it before it's shared.

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