All Comments on 'Upon Consideration'

Please give us a Poem on the earthquake in Nepal from the point of view of a climber on Mount Everest as the onrushing avalanche takes his life ........

The flow of this piece between stanzas mimics the flow of the afternoon. Nicely done!

Very strong imagination disciplining the words to express as close as possible what you see/feel.

I take it, you are facing East to start with, but then your eyes wonder all around.

It gives me some hopeful look into the future, but also an unnerving feeling coming from looking into non existence, (at least not as yet).

Structurally, as always, I find you masterful and in essence with the descriptive qualities/potential of a full symphonic orchestra . Your three liners flow smoothly, without effort, like your glance.

5ed, and thanks for sharing!

Your use of imagery paint a clear picture in this poem. Excellent