All Comments on 'Poker Night Service'

What this story is about...About 8 retards and morons and one whore. The whore and her moron husband thought that love was to behave like that...Another out of place thing: their games were once per month, but in the end seemed it was going to happen weekly...well below 1*...Best thing was to keep it in fetish...

It also lacked any type of writing that made me understand or believe the wife's actions. The men all seemed to have the IQ's of peas and had a "herd" men mentality. Overall it wasn't interesting or fun to read. No stars.

Fun story. Enjoyed the read.

Why????? Why are there always those people out there who can't just critique the story for how it is written and leave out their moral indignation. The author said it was fiction. Do these same people read Star Wars or Avitar and come back with poor opinions of these works because they aren't "believable"??? No.,,,,I suppose not because they aren't given the opportunity for feedback.

This story was well written. Grammar and punctuation far better than more than half the stories submitted to this site. Believable shouldn't even enter in to this....but I can easily say that finding a woman or wife who can love that much would make Me proud. Too bad it is fiction.

4 stars

Not bad at all! I especially liked the end!

Someones got to write the whack stories, might as well be you. Might as well skip all the scenery, back story, setup, etc. They just want to read about people having sex, for any reason, or no reason. Its just not very exciting or interesting reading about animals fucking. But I'm glad it works for your fans.

Poker game whore, one of the cheaper LW cuckold plots.

Well done. Would have normally been an easy "5", but I deduct a point for a bald pussy. Sorry everyone I'm a bush man.