All Comments on 'Guilty Pleasures: Preyed Upon'

by May_I

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mapili50mapili50almost 9 years ago
Wow... great and hot story!

I know you mentioned that this was a one-shot story, but I'd love to read more about Melissa and Warren.

Can't wait to read your other stories and future "Guilty Pleasures".

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 9 years ago
More, please!

I, too, would like to hear more about Melissa and Warren. I like that Melissa was a strong character and turned the tables on Warren. Way to go Melissa.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 9 years ago
Good Job!

Love this! Your writing style was so easy to follow and I loved your development of the story. For this to be your first time in non-con you did a very nice job. It was light but very sexy. Can't wait to read whatever other stories you add to this series! =)

bluesladybluesladyalmost 9 years ago
Wow

Waiting to read more about a about them.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 9 years ago
Love this and hope for more!

Really wonderful. Will you possibly turn this into a series?

May_IMay_Ialmost 9 years agoAuthor
Thanks guys!

Hi everyone, thanks so much for your emails and comments! A lot of people asked will there be another story on these two and the answer is no lol. I like where I've left their story off. I am currently working on a story but it will be in the Incest/Taboo category so I do not think it will be a lot of you all's cup of tea. I'm really happy to be getting so many emails and for those of you who like to read different categories expect my name to be popping up soon in many of those =) *toodles* --I.M

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 9 years ago
just so you know.....

Quote "Sex never felt like this with either of her exes and she remembered neither even knowing how to do fellatio on a woman. "

The word you were looking for is cunnilingus. Unless she has a penis you can't perform fellatio on her.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 9 years ago
Great Work!!

This was a great story! I hope you can get over your writers block soon! I would love to see where your stories in Interracial Love go!!

black_maestrablack_maestraalmost 9 years ago
To anon 5/17/15 of the "Quote"

I think the term is "rimming" or "rim-job." Fellatio IS licking/sucking the penis and cunnilingus IS licking/sucking the va-jayjay, so ur wrong as well. The writer was referring to the ass-licking (rim-job) Melissa was getting from Warren.

KittyOh48KittyOh48almost 9 years ago
Damn this was Hott!

Wow!

Just WOW!

Smokin' Hot!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 9 years ago
hi

Will you do other chapters for the other stories like a week and dirty circumstances

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 9 years ago

Where can I get some of that aphrodisiac shit??!!!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 9 years ago
Hmmmm....wow....WOW....

It's a damn shame when you are jealous if a wicked sensual story.

Yes, I'm talking about me...lol

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago
You are an excellent writer.

Had me in the middle of your story like a voyeur. You write a little/lot like Stephen King. Got me in the first paragraph. Moreover, so much like King.... I don't think I want to ever meet you...Keep writing!

Keith In Ca.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 8 years ago
Great job!

This story was so erotic and sexy. I loved it all!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 8 years ago
Amazing

Goodness this story was hot. Absolutely amazing

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 8 years ago
Get a Life Anon

How the hell did you gather that this story was racists? You sound like an uneducated idiot who goes around trolling great stories just for the hell of it. I loved the story and this is my third time reading it! Great job author, keep it up!

AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago
this is some gross mess

You can't possibly believe that a girl would want a man who molested her, stalked her, drugged her and raped her. Get the fuck out of here with this bullshit.

AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago
Fuck the haters

I fucking loved this story steamy and a twisted 50 shades of grey way lol loved it 10/10 A+ 5 stars please continue i loved the male character he sounds hot love the turn at the end i would like to read more

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 7 years ago
Good Story

I enjoyed the story.

spankfunforspankfunforalmost 7 years ago
Is It Rape-?

When You Both Fall In Love - Or - Rough Foreplay! Why Dinner and Flowers When You Can Get Right To The Good Part? Politically Correct Be Damned! Great Story!

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
Racist?

What is with the comment about first wondering if he was black but he sounded like he had an education????? I'm so disappointed.

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
Bravo

Excellent

Loved the ending and the sex scenes were very well done!

bbwlover812bbwlover812almost 6 years ago
Wow

Great story. I have read all of your post and I like your writing style.

GuyJDGuyJDalmost 4 years ago
KICK ASS STORY

I don't usually care for long stories ( mine are 2 pages or less except sequels). But this was good. Very well written and very creative.

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