All Comments on 'Ella Finds the Right Guy'

I loved it - bluffing the guy with "I'm a lawyer", Aunt Granny's cookies, Ella's transition from withdrawn to confident, and the slightly delayed realization that "You're the guy" made this a winner.

A great short story bringing a slight hint of hope for this old man.

I give 5 stars. $300 and not asking for sex is understandable, but not $3,000. For $3,000 to a stranger, she let the poor gullible man worry to death when he was going to get some.

A fun story nicely played out.

Any stories like this for a guy sixty, and blue is the warmest color.

5 stars, but now I want a fucking cookie. (LOVED that part)

I want the recipe for "fucking cookies" even if I go broke I am sure to have a great time. Loved this story thank you.

Brilliant stuff!

It was great the way you told the story, and then tied it all in with just the word "simple" on a t-shirt. Well done!

Masterful writing. You've got a new fan in me. What a realistic love story. Bravo.

not the first time I have read this and it is still a 5+

I was worried for a while, he didn't seem to be grasping the concept.

Thanks

I liked it 5* worth!

Great build up and then a rush of love and sex - loved it