All Comments on 'Mixed Doubles'

Certainly there will be a change - wait until one or another of the mixed couples starts sneaking off together on their own. Count on it. Still a good story. ***

Well written, and good descriptive talent.

A major fantasy of mine, believable and well written.

Loved it!

Well done, No unnecessary background, still all we need to get familiar with the four characters, including their fantasies and doubts, and about the circumstances. Then off we go into an erotic first time for two couples together, without regrets.

JUST SIMPLY AND HOT.

You can stroke or finger if you want to, but you don't have to, Only after reading you have a good new fantasy, Otazel’s simply hot fantasy.

Not supermodels or gonzo porn stars, just two friendly couples, ordinary people, who share their love of each other and their bodies for some wonderful orgasms. Delightful!

Rye and Ginger Ayle

Totally convincing, I felt like I was there! Thank you!

I particularly enjoyed the one wife's impulse to cup her husband's balls as he was emptying them into the other wife.

ryeandgingerayle2@yahoo.ca

This is very exciting and realistic -- as if I was there with them.