All Comments on 'A Brighton Weekend Pt. 02'

You have continued with the same drive and fervour of the first part, and your descriptors are very good. I will await the threesome and look forward to similar effects on my nether regions. Alison xxx

I loved it, hot and wet with details and a story!

Thank you!

L

Oh Aimie, the things you do to me with your words! This story is so incredibly hot that I can't even think straight to give you a proper comment. Mewling mess indeed! You English girls don't play fair.

Having relished the first part of the story of Aimie's dirty weekend in Brighton (a favourite place to visit anyway), I knew I would be enjoying this second chapter - and boy, I did! The elegant, grammatically correct writing only enhances the eroticism of the narrative, and I particularly love the long sentences, the use of many commas, in the moments as things build to the climax - I felt as carried along with the powerful, arousing blood-rush as our narrator and her amour most happily are. Excellent!

Part two was fantastic,even better than part one. The description of the sex far topping the previous chapter and the adding of Cassie at the end, awesome. I fervently hope there will be a third chapter describing that encounter and then at least one more when Aimie and Linda return to spend time with Margaret and Cassie. I would truly love to read your take on that.

Once again, let me compliment you on your wonderful, fantastic story. I truly loved it.

I wondered, after reading Chapter 1, if there would be a threesome. Well, lo and behold, Chapter 2 did it for me. Now, will there be a chapter 3 wherein the sapphic sisters learn the joy of drinking each other's pee direct from the source? THAT would be kinky!!

I certainly hope there is a chapter 3 with the threesome. And then a chapter 4 when Aimee and Linda return for a visit that includes a 4-some. So many possible stories; so little time. Keep up your good writing.

Very good and I liked the way you ended the story! There is no need for another chapter, just leave it to the imagination of the reader. 😉