All Comments on 'Learning the Rules Ch. 09'

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small_town_girlsmall_town_girlalmost 9 years ago
what a wonderful surprise !

i was so happy to see this bew chapter posted, @Apple!

wonderfully hot and intense as usual. got me all worked up right along with them! :)

great chapter. hope for more soon... xoxo

MasterfuljimMasterfuljimalmost 9 years ago
Very erotic

The scene in the library was as hot as hell. There is nothing better than watching a spread eagled woman play with herself.

You know summat?....I'm almost starting to like him....almost :-)

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 9 years ago
UGH!

Enough said.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 9 years ago

It's good and plenty hot. Stories just feel off a bit when there is no realistic conflict between the mains. All these weeks and she had never said no or even slow down or wait a minute. Never? Nothing they have done has gone wrong or didn't work her?

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 9 years ago
Finally!!!

I waited six months for you to post this chapter! I'm glad you kept your promise to keep the story going. I was not disappointed at all and glad I kept checking for it. Big surprise to see it today! I loved it. I'm glad they have reached this stage finally! Keep it going, hot library scene.

nzf3254pnzf3254palmost 9 years ago
Well done

Glad you finally got around to working on this again....please don't wait so long for the continuation...it may cause discipline

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 9 years ago
Need more

Amazing story!!! Urgently waiting for the next chapter...

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago
Waiting.....

I love this story! Please continue, it's been too long!

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago
Great story

I love this story. I love the intellectual aspects of this story. It is soooo hot! I look forward to the next chapter.

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago
Waiting for more

Hooked on your story of this couple. Please continue with your writing.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 8 years ago
The mind finally makes the change...

Submission is a beautiful thing when the woman understand how powerful she is in her submission and in the moment she finally offers it.

xxMatt

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