All Comments on 'Good, Clean Fun'

Characters and sex play were well described, dialog realistic and all in all a well written story.

Thank you all for your comments. I have submitted an edited version. It is the same story with a correction and less abrupt ending.

There was too many technical words in this story, it made it less sexy. Describing the guys hairy balls made me feel sick. There was too much build up to a quick anal sex scene.

Lovers are so much sexier than fuckers...