All Comments on 'The Schoolgirl Ch. 03'

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minxxxkittenminxxxkittenalmost 9 years ago
So glad you updated !!

Awesome chapter like always ! Hopefully we don't have to wait as long for the next one plz <33

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 9 years ago
Yaaayy

Cant wait for the next chapterrrrr!!!!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 9 years ago
Doesn't seem much like romance.

I must have missed that part.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 9 years ago
I happen to find it hot AND romantic!

Loving the developments of Emelie and Nicholas! Obviously schoolgirl/teacher fantasies have been done before, but you've made it way more original and sexy. It looks like Nicholas is already falling for Emelie, now I wonder if Emelie will fall for him!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 9 years ago

Glad that Laura didnt get attached!!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 9 years ago

I'm really enjoying how this story is developing. i really hope we won't have to wait as long for the next chapter. A month is just way too long. So as always write fast, i really do love it :)

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 9 years ago
Love it!!

Can't wait for the next chapter to find out what happens at the dance :)

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 9 years ago
NEXT CHAPTER???

Please please please post the next chapter already! I'm dying to know what happens next!!

ThesweetsubmissiveThesweetsubmissivealmost 9 years ago
PLS

i can't wait for the next update!!

qnm8qnm8almost 9 years ago
MOREEE!!!

Your writing just gets better and better, jesus! Please don't make your fans wait too long! <3

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago
10/10

Keep up your sexy and beautiful writing! <3 :)

TinyEmTinyEmover 8 years ago
So wonderful!

I can't wait to read more!!!

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago
Pleeeeeeeease update

Please please please update this story...it's so hot oh my goddddd and kind of hits close to home for me...mr Carlisle totally reminds me of a crush I had

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago
love it!

I can't wait to read what happens next. You are an amazing writer!

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago
Pleaseeeeeeeeee

CONTINUEEEEEEEEEEE

PLEAAAAAAAASEEEEEEEEE

writerjabwriterjabover 7 years ago
A great fantasy, but ...

Oh my! A train wreck waiting to happen, not to mention that 15 years is a huge gulf of time in a short life. Oddly, I'm pulling for Jake with Carlisle's honor rescued and Emelie not a shattered remnant like her older brother.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 2 years ago

It made me mad how he literally slept with someone else smh.

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