by Chewiebon
On one hand, life in the dorm can be boring. On the other hand, having a girl like Ashley to take care of you when you slip and fall, makes up for all the boring parts. I thoroughly enjoyed your story.
He just walked down the hall to the RA's room and got let in. Ashley got a reprimand. End of dumb story.
There were rather a lot of silly mistakes and errors.
Please be more careful with your proofreading before submitting your text.
Cheers
Tom D
I enjoyed the story, but swapping between tenses was jarring, and one paragraph began in the middle of a sentence.