All Comments on 'Tale from an Awkward Kid'

On one hand, life in the dorm can be boring. On the other hand, having a girl like Ashley to take care of you when you slip and fall, makes up for all the boring parts. I thoroughly enjoyed your story.

He just walked down the hall to the RA's room and got let in. Ashley got a reprimand. End of dumb story.

There were rather a lot of silly mistakes and errors.

Please be more careful with your proofreading before submitting your text.

Cheers

Tom D

I enjoyed the story, but swapping between tenses was jarring, and one paragraph began in the middle of a sentence.

Please do more... better than porn