All Comments on 'Technically We're Estranged Ch. 03'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago

more please

RasmatRasmatover 8 years ago
Outstanding.

As usual.

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago
lots more please

patiently waiting for tons more chapters.

prop69prop69over 8 years ago
Love the series

Interesting options between Bella and Mel

goldponygoldponyover 8 years ago
smooth man.....smooth

you deliver an amazing story at a pace that builds, builds, then smooths out......ah. Enjoy the development and tempo, but wish they were a little longer and delivered quicker. But because they are so good will stand the current flow. Thanks for sharing with us, and your kinky mind. Wish I was "closer" with my cousins, two blondes, a brunette, and a redhead. GP

rightbankrightbankover 8 years ago
you are having fun with the variations on names

I am trying to figure out who is estranged from whom. Steve, Bella, Mel, or? Did I miss something in an earlier chapter explaining what it means?

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago
please hurry!

Both this and Font are brilliant! I am hooked... cannot wait for the next of both

BreakTheBarBreakTheBarover 8 years agoAuthor
Thanks all

Hey folks,

Thanks for all the votes and comments. TWE 4 will be coming very soon, though Chapter 5 will take a bit as I need to prioritize my other series.

To the question about 'who is estranged,' I thought the concept was fairly clear that Mel and Stephan are estranged. The definition of estranged relatives is as follows: 'no longer friendly, alienated.' Mel and Stephan have not spoken in years and have lost touch with each other - they might still be friendly if they were to run into each other, but otherwise have no contact.

Until this story, of course.

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago
Can't wait for more

I check back every day!

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago

i love the way this story is unfolding cant wait to see if he makes a tape for mel or she sees his face on cam going to be great

cliqueggecliqueggeover 8 years ago
loving it

I will get to the "Font" series soon.

Thanks

LUSTYWHEELSLUSTYWHEELSalmost 8 years ago
wicked!

I love it but he needs to stop tipping and send a plane ticket. The 3 of them can have real fun

MeBr123MeBr123almost 7 years ago
holy shit

This series is really, really hot. I LOVE the long drawn out buildup!!!

Icarus93Icarus93over 6 years ago
Fuck

I'm loving the shit out of this.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 4 years ago
I'm loving...

... how much the aggressor Bella's becoming. Will she get her wish? I hope so!

MarkT63MarkT63over 2 years ago

Maybe a threesome with Bella??

JodailyJodaily5 months ago

Truly hot.. I'm half thinking that Mel knows who Stephan is, and is living out an old incestual fantasy off hers. At least, that's what my dick is hoping for. And I agree with the previous comment, send her a ticket! That would be a really hot three way!! Sticky keyboard here. On to the next one.

KnightofmindKnightofmind7 days ago

Good freaking stuff man! Dangerous sex! Mhmm? Tantalizing? Titillating? Acting! Thank you!

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