by BreakTheBar
you deliver an amazing story at a pace that builds, builds, then smooths out......ah. Enjoy the development and tempo, but wish they were a little longer and delivered quicker. But because they are so good will stand the current flow. Thanks for sharing with us, and your kinky mind. Wish I was "closer" with my cousins, two blondes, a brunette, and a redhead. GP
I am trying to figure out who is estranged from whom. Steve, Bella, Mel, or? Did I miss something in an earlier chapter explaining what it means?
Both this and Font are brilliant! I am hooked... cannot wait for the next of both
Hey folks,
Thanks for all the votes and comments. TWE 4 will be coming very soon, though Chapter 5 will take a bit as I need to prioritize my other series.
To the question about 'who is estranged,' I thought the concept was fairly clear that Mel and Stephan are estranged. The definition of estranged relatives is as follows: 'no longer friendly, alienated.' Mel and Stephan have not spoken in years and have lost touch with each other - they might still be friendly if they were to run into each other, but otherwise have no contact.
Until this story, of course.
i love the way this story is unfolding cant wait to see if he makes a tape for mel or she sees his face on cam going to be great
I love it but he needs to stop tipping and send a plane ticket. The 3 of them can have real fun
This series is really, really hot. I LOVE the long drawn out buildup!!!
... how much the aggressor Bella's becoming. Will she get her wish? I hope so!
Truly hot.. I'm half thinking that Mel knows who Stephan is, and is living out an old incestual fantasy off hers. At least, that's what my dick is hoping for. And I agree with the previous comment, send her a ticket! That would be a really hot three way!! Sticky keyboard here. On to the next one.
Good freaking stuff man! Dangerous sex! Mhmm? Tantalizing? Titillating? Acting! Thank you!