All Comments on 'Falling for the First Time Ch. 01'

This story has great potential, keep it up!

I'm looking forward to reading more

Chapters in this story. You've done a good job setting up the characters. Please keep writing.

Agree with Anon, a good start - looking fwd to what comes next.

...on Loterotica. Jaz is a believable character, and so is her virginity. How she loses it will be a great second, or third chapter! Opening flower stories are in short supply here.

I like the start of this. Like others have said, Jaz is a very authentic and relateable character, and your writing is so clean and consistent so it's easy to follow along and exciting to follow along, more importantly. I can't wait for more chapters!

P.S. That last anon comment was mine since I wasn't logged in for whatever reason lol

For what I hope becomes a very good multi-chapter story.

When are you gonna post the next chapter?

Your comments are much appreciated. I hope to get the 2nd chapter up by sometime next week!

Stick around :)

Great start!!!!! Looking forward to more!!!!

Missed this story the first go around, came back to it when I saw the second story. Nice writing, decent development, the sex was just right in the mix of the plot. I would be Leery of any guy whose bad attitude surfaces so easily. He was having a bad day, that should not allow him to be a dick. Watch out for him. The true test of a person is how they act towards others while under stress! Keep up the great writing though!

I like your work; a lot.

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You are a good writer. Just enough daydreams interspersed to keep it interesting. Looking forward to future chapters.

Wonderful start to the story. Looking forward to more.

Love it

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This is truly impressive writing. I thoroughly enjoyed this chapter! :)

Nice start. Looking forward to the next chapter.