All Comments on 'Fit At Forty'

by roddymac99

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gnomishgnomishalmost 9 years ago
Disappointment

I was already sure you were going to get five stars but then you just had to go and spoil an excellent story. What a disappointment.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 9 years ago
Good work

American but I totally enjoy the UK settings such as this. A very realistic story line - Jennifer just gets carried away one things leads to another. Good pacing and some very good dialogue. Actually, the story is a little close for comfort for me - as I turned somewhat frisky after I caught my husband cheating in our bed when I was forty.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 9 years ago
what a fuck!!!!!

Jennifer was horny and she met her match with the old cabbie.what a ride she had.

AnonymousAnonymous3 months ago

Great story and a very different ending!

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Amateur author using my imagination to try to create real-life plots with realistic characters and the odd twist. I hope to present my tales with a high degree of reality. On occasion, they may include localised dialect to help character appreciation. Likewise, the charact...