by totallyatease
Not at all romantic but not at all animalistic either. Just in and out, done. I was hoping for a bit more passion.
Interested in where you're going, though.
I was interested in this story in the beginning, but I just don't feel like I am getting enough substance from it. There was little to no passion and it left a lot of questions about them being bonded and bred.
I like that it NOT all about Sex, Kudos. But you can go into a Little more details when it comes to the sex scenes. But I Hope you will continue with this story, don't stop because of a few Nay Sayers.
I did not feel their urgency to mate or their passion for eachother. You need someone to help you with the erotic scenes. But I still like the story :)