All Comments on 'Telemarketing Turnabout Pt. 08'

Thank you and please add more

Really like the series but would rather see you close out a few others before expanding this one.

Elizabeth (Lizzie) likes her new "dad". But how much? Becka is willing to share and wants a happy family. A gentle push might be what it takes. Also Becka shared only from A to F with the odd M. But there are so many other letters. Right?

I would love to see the mother daughter combo again

The first two chapters were really good, but this story has gone astray. My belief isn't suspended on the whole Robo-Cock guy who satisfies a whole house full of women, including a daughter? Time to move on.

I usually don't make comments but I like the storyline you should continue it

especially since he didn't understand it WAS a dream even when back in reality...

I'm kind of surprised he wasn't heartbroken when his "daughter" ceased to exist. His dream gave him decades of life raising a daughter... No way there wasn't an emotional connection. The fact it was just a dream wouldn't have CHANGED the emotional connection that dream built.

But I've liked the stories overall...

She resented her husband fucking a younger woman, but is OK fucking younger women herself? The story started very romantic and compelling, but kind of disappeared among the random pussy he ends up sharing with his wife. What's he gonna say when the wife brings home a man to share one day, a man she just can't deny, nor get enough of?

Not a good prognosis.

I think, if you read the story, you'll find that her ex CHEATED with a younger woman. Operative word - cheat. All the other women involved afterwards are by consent, and Becca even says that if her ex had asked she might have joined in, but he didn't.... He just cheated.

More than a little difference between a lying spouse, and one that includes her in the choices, isn't it?

I absolutely loved this series. Fabulous interweaving of the characters, story and sex. Hopefully there is more life to these characters. Each chapter was an easy 5*, but closer to 10

I have thoroughly enjoyed reading this series and yes I think there is much more life in it yet.

Perhaps you could work towards Bobby's dream coming true. Now that would make it really hot again.

Your way of presenting the story with Bobby having this dream about Becca's daughter and other members of the family was really unique. It was amazing to go through the story thinking that Bobby had made love to all of the women in his family,

Getting Becca's daughter pregnant and marrying her But continuing to love Becca was truly a different way to present the story.

Keep up the good work with your writings and I look forward to more. As far as I am concerned you are a five star writer. Shalom

I loved the series and would love to see more chapters. It would be great to see Becca end up being with both of her kids instead of just Lizzie now that we know that Clay isn't an asshole like in the dream.

The first two chapters are really great... but all the dream sequence was a waste of time.

Then her wife cheats with the brazilian pussy without his consent or even asking...

"Hey honey, I was horny and I'm a whore so let's just fuck."

Add more anal bits in between

Amazing story, especially since he woke from the "dream". I like reading incest, but that was just starting to get too cocky. Now that he's met her kids, I love to see her meet his parents.

Im glad Lizzie was still stacked like her mom even outside the dream. I think there is more here. It would be great if Lizzie brought a friend by to use the pool and while Lizzie was tanning, Bobby was able sneak the friend away and have some fun with her... with Beccas consent. Maybe a bday gift?

Thanks for killing the other story line...it got too unbelievable. I would like tosee Becca get preg.

I still think the "dream" thing was a mistake. The first story-line was no more unbelievable than most of your's. The second is a whole separate story.

My neck is sore from being jerked around.

Nice ending to a delicious tale. Well written and simply delightful from the fantasy line to the more realistic line ~ BRAVA!! Thank You :)

Dream bit was a mistake but overall a good read.

Everything after the dream doesn’t feel real, not emotionally involved in the story.

Still an amazing story but think the dream took away from.the story a bit. You did well to get more from the story though before it became stale with the same thing happening over and over. I'd read whatever you wrote anyway so not against what happened just my opinion. Regardless pretty much every story you have is 5 star like this one. I like the characters so look forward what you come up with next for them despite my reservations on the dream part.

Oh one thing I thought would have helped with clay being a dick earlier is if he had been cheating on his wife and that's why she fell in with his Becca and lizzy. Otherwise they went after their sons and brothers wife without enough of a reason in my opinion. Him just being a dick and her being hot made them look pretty bad.

I loved this story both the dream sequence and the real. I found it romantic, sexual and very well told.....love this author!

very good, but constant sex does get a little old, try adding more story to give it a little break.

Am left to wunder how their relationship with her kids turns out. But

What a journey this was. after marrying her daughter, and the harem he had going on, add the time, add the daughter, it was good. But then it turned into a dream, back in time where he marries Becca, Awesome. That's the way it should have been. She kinda got dumped in the dream. This is the way it should have been. Would she ever have another child? This is one story I would like to see continued (along with all the others) 5 stars

Mike

I still think the story should have ended in the last chapter, which was the climax. Any other chapter is only superfluous. For instance, there is nothing in this chapter other than Bobby meeting Becca's children which was really not relevant to the story. This and a lot of sex, which in the end becomes monotonous. It was a great read-one of the best I have read-but the tale should have ended with Chapter 7

Think the story shoul have ended after Ch one as the rest is just duplication.

You ruined the ending by having Becca start fucking someone else without her husband knowing about it until afterwards just because it was another woman don't make a difference she still cheated on him if he would have known and was present from the start then fine but he didn't and her excuse for her cheating was he got her hot and bothered that morning like it justfis her cheating on him with another woman all that does is tell anyone with common sense if it would have been a male Dr she had that appointment with she would have done the same thing so no don't do another story about the characters unless you write it and loop it back around before the twist otherwise just end it here lick your wounds for the ruined ending and try again on your next story

I do have to agree with dgfergie all your story lines was told in extremely short burst and before the twist that didn't help the cause any between the lack of a story and your ruined ending leaves this with a low score rating and not even a average rating sorry but it's the truth more story lines could have saved it some but not completely when you add a twist it should be revelent to the story which this really wasn't then add the ending just made your twist a waste of time as in the end you followed the stupid ass norm for a story in the lw catagory by a cheating wife and turning the mc a cuck i realized I forgot to actually say what I thought about it in general in my last comment at least reasons why so I decided to this comment ill rate but it falls under even an average rating score