by MSTarot
I like the writing i style, the build up. The masturbation and then the sex. Really good. A very strong 4. I am cautious to give a five to anything other than the truly masterful, thought provoking and mind blowing stories. Yours was great so don't take it as a criticism.
LIke this a lot, imagination gets it done every time. More like this please
Hot! Very very hot! It got me there in just minutes...ummmmmm.....