parents relent and join in w/ sibs. then it comes out that grand parens were not man and second wife, but man and sister, that is why 1st moved so far away
please keep going with the series, i would like to see how things turn out between the couples.
Don't stop now. This has been a very interesting story and I would like to see how it really ends. I think that it will end on a very happy note.
Yes keep it going. Let them have a orgy at the family reunion.
About the non- swapping rule... How would it be possible to enforce? Small matching tatoos for each of the couples maybe?
Another great story in this series.. Please keep this theam going.. Keep the parents out maby an accidental pregnancy for mom but who is the father???
One of the best stories I ever read! Please go on and maybe forget about not swapping partners!
IT WOULD BE NICE TO SEE THE QUAD WOWAN TO GET PREGNANT BY THE QUAD MEN AND THE QUAD MEN NURSING ON THE WOWAN UNTILL THE QUAD WOMAN HAVE QUAD THEMSELF.THANK YOU FOR THE GREAT STORY KEEP UP THE GOOD WORK.
...unless you have the mother have twins, which we know is impossible since she had her TUBES TIED so that means Stacy & Steph have to have TRIPLETS with both of them having 3 boys & 3 girls which would greatly mess up any ideas of them fucking for a while before (1 or 2 weeks before & after) the children are born. Forget the idea, it was a bad 1.
Really liking this story although the names are getting confusing since they all start with the same letter - although I know families in real life do that - crazy!
Nice job. Keep it up, it's the best I've read in a long time.
I still feel like a voyeur. Some parts started to get into it, but I think your decission to keep changing scenes kept the mental sensations from developing. It's like having your partner ask you to do something else just as you start enjoying what you are doing; and then changing again, just as you get going again; and again; and again. It just kills it. Nothing developes.
If you like writing these kind of stories, then they will be read and forgotten almost as fast. But if you want it to be remembered, you have to get your readers involved in the story. Let them pick which character is like they want to be and then tear their insides out as they feel the desire and sensations in their own bodies. Making them suffer to find their own relief; to quench the torment of their developing desires. To experience the same feelings as their chosen character. That is pure pleasure.
About 2/3 in the character should have been Stacy not Stephanie. Other wise excellent so far.
omg this got me hard and left me hard the entire time cant wait for the next one but the only bad thing is the quick switching back and forth at the end
"My sisters, Stephanie and Stacy, along with my brother, Shane and I are a set of identical 18 year old quadruplets."
This is not possible. A set of identical twin brothers, and a set of identical twin sisters born as quads are not impossible, or even rare, resulting as they do from the fissioning of a pair of eggs in the womb; however, it's genetically and medically impossible for identical twins, triplets or quads to be anything except the same gender; they come from a single egg, and therefore have 100% identical DNA, not just the shared DNA mix and match ordinary fraternal twins will have. You really need to check your facts before making absurd statements like the one above. 2 stars for being so lazy.
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