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All Comments on 'Laurie the Dirty Virgin'

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sandymonroesandymonroeover 8 years ago

It's just not developed well enough.

chytownchytownover 8 years ago
A Real Piece Of ASS!!!! ****

Good read. Thanks for sharing

LucyLovesLitLucyLovesLitover 8 years ago
Editor

You may wish to brush up on your stories with an editor. There are formatting errors like how to write dialogue.

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago
end could be worked up

Beginning is great. The end you could work up. Maybe you write more parts?

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago
and to annony whose wife is a dirty cock sucker, I just wanted to say

I bet ou have sucked many cocks too or at last drank their cum!!

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