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I'm of two minds about this little tale. I quite liked your presentation and the sexual connection between your characters. I thought that you handled it very well. The description of their action was very good, except for the usual problem of people not understanding that the hymen guards the entrance to the vagina and one doesn't get an inch of entry without tearing it.

It is the set-up of two virgin teens meeting after a cross-country flight. I haven't been a teenager for 60 years, but that set-up just doesn't work for me. It spoiled what was otherwise quite a nice effort.

What is the current going ons of the two people?

Hearthammer,

Sorry to disappoint you, but their love couldn't hold up under the strain of living so far apart. They did fuck like rabbits while he was in town, and continued to send lots of naughty pictures and masturbated quite often over Skype before the relationship fell apart.

She still misses her first, of course.

Anonymous,

This is going to be pretty weird, but I'm actually pretty well educated about the hymen (and it's not actually supposed to tear during sex). It's one of my weird kinks, however, so I threw it in there. But thank you! I'm sure this will help me improve my writing!

Hi

I am going to confess here something which really happened

we were 2000 miles apart and we were not virgin

and we fucked like rabbits

I remember each n every moment ..wish I could have ability to write

Your story made me so happy reminding those fantastic days n nights

thank you for sharing

Erotic and exciting. It gets better as the story unfolds.