All Comments on 'The Essence of the Ecstasy'

What a way to start the day. An elegant, narrative poem that paints an irrisistable exotic scene. Held back to strict tastefullness and a gemtleman's deliberate non-display of passion, it is not quite erotica as I'd defne it, but none the less sexy as f**k.

This beautiful poem has gifted me with a calming pause, to witness morsels of the finer essences of living... sensual jewels too often overlooked in the sea of gross overstimulation in today's media. For this opportunity to allow my heart to sing and expand, I thank you, Ronde.

would have been much better if you had made it rhyme. 4 foot lines in this lyric form need rhymes

I loved it.

Very nicely done!

Thank you!