All Comments on 'A Strange Encounter Ch. 04'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago
A bit too fast

Seemed a bit too rushed into the whole mom/dad thing. Was no slow build up to the parents joining in, needed some static associated with the new knowledge of what was going on and slow consideration of the aspects associated with the parent's becoming part of the activity.

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