All Comments on 'Smiles to Steamy'

I was completely wet by d end of d story.

Any plans to add another part or two to this story? It had me from beginning to end... Wow!

Dis is so sexy!

Thanks for so many views and rating and the comments :) this is my very first time of writing a short story, even non-erotic,so im really glad all of you are enjoying it..

yes, i planned to write more on this, but was wayyy too 'Distracted' to finish the last bit in detail..So thinking of writing a sequel to it continuing the character's development :)

steamy? yes yes yes. i want to read more. u shudav written third time and fourth time too LOL

Amazing story I want a sequel describing what their next step is and how their future goes

Dear anonymous,

Thank you so much! yes, i plan to write a sequel to this soon, please do check back in a week. hopefully, you will enjoy it more :)

Awesome story. So hot.

Thank you dear anonymous!

Good tension and pace. Brilliant! Especially for a first time of writing. Keep it up!

thank you so much for liking my story!!!

This is my kind of story. I love it. Hope to see more! Awesome!!!

I have read this story and re-read it. I keep watching for more stories from you. I sincerely hope you will continue to share your talent. You are a gifted writer. Damn fine. Please give us more!

Dear Anonymous,

thank you so so much!

I have been meaning to finish couple of more stories I have been working on, so that I can upload here, but i cant seem to find the time! ill do it soon so that you read and enjoy them :)

Perfect.

Few write about love on here.

I might have had a tear in my eye.

Being Retired from the Army I know about the loss of a loved one. The Loneliness that haunts you every waking moment and Terrorizes us in our dreams. My Heart melted at the end when Love was found as they embraced, and that's saying a lot coming from a 64 year old Retired Army man.