All Comments on 'Bree's Journey Pt. 03'

The only change that I would make is to divide each chapter into 2 or 3 page segments. I like the feeling of completing a chapter and it is easier to read since I read when I can and don't have long periods of time in any one sitting, yes, I am frequently reading at work and I only have so long that I can take before I have to run to the ladies room to manage my wetness. The bite sized piece I can finish, but the longer one leaves me torn and wet.

All's well that ends well. I do love a happy ending. You wrote an intriguing plot line that kept me reading longer than I should have. Thank you for sharing your talent with me. Judy

disagree with the 1st anon comment.

it's really easy to bookmark a page in browser favorites too return to later , if one does not have the time to read the whole chapter / story ...

breaking a story down into lesser , penny packets serves no purpose..

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totaly agree with judy

i found all 3 chapters to be exceedingly well written , interesting , intriguing , engaging & entertaining

a very worthy 5 stars for all three parts

I can relate to many of the characters in so many ways.

Very, Very Good.

I'd like to see this continue. So many possibilities.

i didn't like the fact that Bree's love interest was bi,but then i'm probably not the target audience for this story,i will say it's well written,but simply not my cup of tea in terms of stroke material

The family dynamic was really well written. Bree's insecurities were keeping her from seeing that her parents were proud of her. Whilst parents needed to allow Daniel the distance to grow comfortable with his sexuality.

Meh

This is a wonderful story and one of the best I've read in a long while! Thank you.

Love this series!! Very well done!

What a delightful surprise it was to read this story, all the way from Part 1. I was expecting just sex, sex, sex, as with most of the stories on here but this had a real story with it, a good one at that, plus character builds *and* it was written well - a real rarity on here.

You really need to read it from Part 1 but it sure is worth it. Thank you, D_Lynn!

I certainly didn't expect this story to be so great. I just thought she's going to be trapped in that life in part 1. But. HAWT DAMN! I wasn't even focused in the sex anymore lol. The plot was just amazing. Whew!

A satisfying conclusion, plot wise. Well done :)