All Comments on 'Storm of Shadows Ch. 06'

Well as worth the wait.

Jaz you are a writer par excellence. Some more please

Thank you for the awesome chapter. Your writing never fails to move me..

That was great.

Intense!!!!!

Thanks !

This story from the very beginning has held me captive. I search daily for updates and next chapters. LOVE IT!!!!

Thank you so much for sharing!

Ugh I wanted Dara to be his mate, not some rando human

You keep improving - very strong chapter!

Thank you, I have enjoyed your stories and because of you and a few others and motivated to start writing in this specific genre myself....Wonder!!!

Fox is Dara's mate

I just love the way you do this: You have done this all through this saga of yours -you sort of bubble along for a few chapters, picking up a few trails and wisps of plot and story here and there, mixing the plot together like magic (and writing beautifully!), setting it all off into the air with a gentle, or not so gentle *pooofff*... and then, KAPBOOMB!! you hit us with the big stuff. There, you got us! And I thank you for it!

I love your writing; this story you've been weaving (obviously going from the first instalment with Rihanna and Caleb, to this) for so long now!.

You've picked up so many fans along that way, does anyone really think about whether there's any sex in the story anymore? We just want your brilliant storytelling!

Well that's what I want anyways,,,

Flissxx

that was foretold within the last few chapters.... :)

*faints* *wakes up* *faints again* WHEW that was amazing! Can't wait for more!

This series is the best of them all. I love Kothi!! I will be patiently waiting for the next chapter....

I look forward to the next installment,I even liked the cliffie at the end and you know how I feel about cliffie, Jazzy. lol

Really u're a great writer with such cool character build up , Wished Kothi's become fully in control. Agony just like Shyntre in the Etaski's series. Great story

Need more! Need more!!!!!

How do you know? Did I miss something?

Because of his attraction to her sister?

Amazing. I will wait for the next installment but it won't be with much patience.

DONT DO THIS TO ME AGAIN JAZ. MY HEART CANT TAKE IT :'(

I love this world you've created! I have read all the books in this series a few times now and am so excited you are still posting! I always think you've created my favorite character or couple and then you do another.. although I really do love Freya's character probably most. I speculate that Fox must be Daras mate.. Elijah is the master?? the female alpha is maybe Kallums mate? I'd love to see Louis taken down by a female wolf.. so many possibilities! Please keep writing! I'm excited to see where this story goes next.. and i cant wait for Kothi to find some peace and happiness.

No! He has to come back and save the mother!

Love, love love this story!

You never fail to amaze me with your writing... I anxiously await your next update.

I can't even begin to explain how excited I was to see a new chapter, I honestly did a double take I was that surprised and happy. Thank you!

Excellent update!! A couple of errors, but I am happy to forgive them for the story!! (Kick your editor in the shin!) Please do not have us wait as long. I am excited about the turn. Not sure I expected all of this!

My girl is back!!!! Wow!! What a ride THIS one has been!!

You milady are a MASTER storyteller!! Thank you so much for sharing your gift with us!! Buuuut.......Jaz darling, puuulease don't make us wait so blasted loooong!!

I'm almost as tortured as poor Kothi!!!

Lmbo

Omg!!!!!!!! I can honestly say that this story is off the hook.....damn

and she does it again..another monster installation!

I troll lit erotica everyday 4 Jaz installments..

But kothari really looks weak without agony..once again running away when he's in control..

Super installment as always!!

Oh no! Kothi, no! What a beautiful, screwed up, tortured soul!

Jaz and her cliffhangers. Sometimes, I wish I stumbled across your stories a few years from now. That way, I wouldn't have to wait for the updates. Thank you so much for your stories, they are among the best I've read. KUDOS

I thought Dara is kothi's mate but things are getting confused..

Love this chapter once again. Could it be he has two mates? One for vamp one for his panther . That would be so cool.

Update on my birthday! :) yeah! Love it!

Loving this storyline!!! Keep them coming!!!

Hope he forgives himself. Agony will be back..... So amazing as always, loved it!

just wow!

Another amazing instalment. You draw us in so well and then leave us hanging at the end of the chapter :-) Loving this story and can't wait for the next chapter.

HAVE SOME FIRY DIALOGUES BETWEEN KOTHI AND HIS MATE

Great update. Except, I get that Kothi's head is in a weird space but the first meeting with his mate was a bit off. Could've been better. The fight scene blew me away though. Dara blew me away. She's cool. Kothari though, staking a vampire down with a bone! This scene beat the the fight scene in The Council and When World's Collide. The only one that could one up Kothari with regards to dramatic effect would be Anakatrine

Beautiful as it is, it is becoming a bit confusing. Thought Dara was Kothi's mate all along! Or maybe Agony is Dara's mate...... Keep writing! You are a great writer.

am a bit confused, is it the girl or the mother?

Loving this part of the series, but am very curious as to who is Dara's mate. I have been thinking that it could be Fox, but you never fail to surprise me, so as usual I will be eagerly awaiting the next chapter. NEVER STOP WRITING PLEASE!

I was hoping dara would be kothari's mate because i wanted to see what kind of child they would have since this is the only chance to have two different were hybrids mating well am sure you would have something to console my broken heart

I saw some of the other comments from readers who are getting confused about Kothari's mate. I have read all the stories and I remember the similarities with Dara's twin, the difference with the mating bond vs that of the wolves & vamps is the tri-personality of the Varcolac. Makes sense to me that all 3 would need to agree on their mate. I'm loving it! Not the same old stuff! Plus I have faith that you will have just the perfect mate for Dara. :)

Almost wrote "Wonderful writing as usual", but it's even better!

Love the twist where the attack on his mate drives Agony so crazy he almost ends up killing his mate!

I don't see Kothari as weak, just ashamed and terrified of his monster side, which is totally understandable.

I love that you don't feel obliged to throw in gratuitous sex scenes just because it's literotica and you do them so well.

Please keep the chapters coming, but don't feel pressured to rush them. I only have withdrawal symptoms for about a week after each chapter, so you might as well take the time to keep producing masterpieces.

Just make sure you stay healthy so you can keep writing!

P.S.: you've done a great job with Kothari's mate confusion. I had no trouble following along as you revealed his fixation on Dara as a crush rather than a mate bond. A pity Kothi's confusion seems to have been contagious to some readers :-) .

I absolutely love the world you've created. I've read through the entire series several times now. My favorites being the Council and Tears. While there are definitely discrepancies in time line and some story details, what you truly excel at is creating characters and relationships that it's impossible not to care about. Not just the romantic ones either, but the sibling, friendships, and parental relationships as well. I'm eager to see how Kallum will take his rightful place as alpha of the Varcolac and their mates, Dara meeting her mate (who I assume is Fox), how Karn will break through Elina's defenses, what will happen to Gard and Rayne... Please don't keep us waiting too long! I greatly appreciate the time you take to write for us, please keep up the good work!

I started this saga somewhere in the middle. I have been reading for weeks. Now I am going to have to go back and start at the beginning. More weeks of reading I'm sure. You know, its funny, my most common complaint on this site is that the stories are to short. Hah! Guess you showed me! Love it! 5*s

Can't wait for the rest of Kothi's story!!!

Go back and read this on going saga from the very beginning! Please, it is absolutely AWESOME!!!!

I'm waiting breathlessly for the next chapter on pins and needles.

I check daily.

JazCullen has had me from the start and as the characters and families evolved I've laughed, cried, loved and went through the ups and downs of all of them with them.

Not many writers can do that to me. I would give more then 5 stars if I could!

I hope you update soon! Your writing is addicting!

Agony is interesting, but then again all of the Varcolac are very, very interesting. Agony has an inner beast.., how about that?! Wonder if Kothari has an inner beast that is not Agony? Ha! Maybe instead of 2 or 4 that make up the being that is Kothi/Agony/Vampire/Panther..., maybe with the introduction of his mate and apparently feeling responsible for a child will create an altogether different being. Maybe, possibly after he stops running and takes care of the "Great Evil" that is coming..., and learns to interact with "All" that he is..., besides a "Sarcasticly Funny Fantastic Killing Machine"..., we will figure out how and why the Varcolac have such varing powers. Are their powers still developing and will mature into something else? This is awesome stuff!! As you know I can make up all kinds of scenarios with your work. Lol - it's just that good and intriguing. I could spin and spin and not be mad if I am dead wrong. Everything you have created I enjoy. So I will wait patiently (impatiently) for another chapter. Thanks so much for this.

Annnnnd, who would be Dara's mate? Hmmmmm. What about if or when Rhianna and Caleb meet Mila and Dante? What if the Queen has to make an appearance? Where are Kothi's parents? Will Kothi's new family be the trigger that possibly shows us that his human mate maybe more than meets the eye? There is a Battle Royale brewing....., this is just a fascinating blip in the World of JazCullen. I CANNOT WAIT!!!!!!

Amazing!!!!

This is really well done, I just spent my spring break reading everything you've written, and I end up here. Thank you for writhing these stories, they're amazing.

I haven't seen any story updates on wattpad, so I get to this site and had a WHOLE three chapters to binge on 🙆🏾. In the beginning I wasn't sure if this story because Agony is....a bit much for me, but I never doubted your talent.

Thanks,

SimplyJeigh

Bravo!! I just caught up and I am so excited to read some more!

After nearly a year hiatus from reading your stories (in order to cut down ony frustration of cliffies), I am once again entralled and enraptured by your storytelling abilities, my dear Jaz. So much so, it is now 5:30 am and I have yet to sleep since restarting in chapter 12 of Tears around 5:30 yesterday evening (I took a couple breaks, but have been going strong since about 1 thus morning).... I can emphasize my closing point enough.... UPDATE SOON PLEASE, luv!!!!

You are killing us with the waiting. I need to know if is a weekly , fortnightly, or monthly update cause I check every week and nothing. You're killing meeeeeee :'(

I keep checking for updates and alas, nothing.. it is only a compliment to your writing that we are all waiting so impatiently! I can't wait for the rest of this story to play out!

Incredible chapter. You have a real talent for taking the plot forward and weaving amazing detail in the story. So much happens in only 2 pages and a bit, but how vivid!

Please I am going crazy I need my fix (:

Need I say more.

Mike from Texas

... jaz ... where is the next installment ... where .... cuz i need to know ...

I dropped all other stories while waiting Sos to be updated. My favorite writer and all that. Bought FTI in iBooks as gift to friend.

Keeping sane by reading "Running with Wolves"

by BlueWolfDancer4454'

New concept to w\wolves!

Sorry to bug this is an amazing story so far, 2 months??? Better be a 10 page chapter :)

Your stories are beyond great. The soul you show in characters shines through. Thank you for the wonderful journey

I'm so glad I'm not alone in checking back every day for my fix. That being said, I really hope our beloved Jaz is ok!!

By having different names for the three distinctive parts of himself, it would appear that Kothari/Agony/panter has compartmentalized his 3 selves so far apart that no wonder he is afraid. I don't understand why the pack or at the very least his parents and Anakatrine didn't sense that. I understand that the Varcolac were underestimated and not really given a chance tolet loose and test their limits, but the total isolation of Agony from the others including the other hybrids seems a bit far fetched.

However, in a way I am glad he was finally able to really let loose and even though it is disturbing, he now knows that at least Data accepts him, all of him even though he scares her witless. Now that he knows that the human girl is his mate he won't lose so much control of his vampiric side.

It still makes me wonder what happened when he was so young that he felt he had to hide Agony from everyone...all the Varcolac seem to have a control issue in one form or another and some with more.

This story sure got very exciting.

I wonder if Kallum's mate is going to be the very strong female Alpha of the decimated pack, interestingly enough this is also Fox's pack too.

I think I see a merging of this European pack and the mated Varcolacs.

I have read all your stories starting from the very beginning and waiting on Storm Of Shadows to continue is killing me! please let me know as soon as possible when you will be continuing your story because I'm dying of waiting here! can you please let me know when the next chapter will be posted even if it's not right away just so I have some idea? thanks!

The wait is killing me and I think Storm of Shadows is my favorite of all. I find Kothari very fascinating I cant wait to see how he interacts with his human mate!

I havent been here for prob about a year or more. But to come and find this story....already at chap 6....my day instantly looked brighter. Go Kothi! Go Dara! YAY Joshua...gotta love them all.

Will also look for FTI in my local bookstore...YAY

Please continue soon, also I'm at a loss he was going to kill the wolf not the human. And he said he almost killed his mate so the wolf is his mate not the human?

Loving all of your stories but the waiting is killing me its been a long wait for the next chapter fingers crossed it will be soon. Pretty pretty please

...so, had to back up, found first book on Amazon Prime and have read all stories straight through. Have two weeks of tv saved or deleted. Glad we hit the between season dull drums. Actually happy I got sick this past week so I could read and not work. :( That's just so wrong, being a responsible adult and all. Handed this story line to my book club that only reads online authors. They're still at book 1-3, but since we're RL BF, talking about mutual tv shows, and girls night, has been put on hold, because of this series, so we have like 6 hours of show and dinner time backed up.

Next chapters would be lovely before the Olympics start, though I suppose could read during boring sports...maybe I'll just cancel watching summer shows...depending on how fast you submit to end of book. Wished I had found at end of this book. GAWD! Long winded for THIS SERIES ROCKS, but painfully slow with submissions. Cruel and devious punishment!

Is been so long, is everything alright we need more pls more more

I discovered this series right before my mom had surgery for a brain tumor. It has been so wonderful to read these while sitting with her as she recuperates-really keeps my mind occupied. Can't wait for the next ones. Thanks for your wonderful engaging story telling!!!

I like the premise of the story, but after 8 books it feels too predictable. Would have built more tension if agony stayed and Kothari actually had to fight it or lost until his mate was ready. . Feels too prototypical of this series, almost like you can predict what will happen without actually having to read it.

Excellent writing!

Excellent story!

Wonderful characters.

if I like the idea of Kallum and the female Alpha being mates. I guess it would make sense since there are already three mated to Vamps, and a possible 4th with Elina and Karn, and now a human. But I've always kind of wanted Kallum to have a human mate too. Oh well, we'll see how it plays out. I still really want to see more of Cassia & Pietro too. There are unanswered questions there. Why his mating scar is still visible? Why was Cassia hesitant he was her mate? Did his strength, already enhanced by feeding from her become even greater than normal after the mating? Are they even truly mated? We've yet to see them communicate through a mate bond...

You are a downer try the old saying if you can't say something nice don't say anything at all.

Totally agree @anonymous 6/18/17!!!

I love your creativity in general, but the way you don't hold back with gore and creative torture makes me that much more excited when I read your work. This makes me sound deranged and possibly a sadist, I'm not, I just love that you truly do express the extent of Agony's bloodlust and the idea of staking a vampire to a tree with a thigh bone is so Hannibal that I LOVE IT.