All Comments on 'A New Mutual Hobby'

by OpenMinded348

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ansdguyansdguyabout 8 years ago
Good story

I only hope that the next chapter come out soon.

writerjabwriterjababout 8 years ago
Well the sex ...

Was superb. Not sure about the drug use as today's shit seems so scary. Just like Mom said. Glad they fucked and look forward to your next installment. Take your time though, enjoy telling the story and let it end on its own accord.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 8 years ago
nice tale

nice tale but she has a waist not a waste. it is a fast moving tale. she arrives

watches move does weed tells all her faults and they have sex.

papabeardougpapabeardougabout 8 years ago
Great start can't wait for follow up

Super start can't wait for what will be a great story

AnonymousAnonymousabout 8 years ago
Wow . Amazing

I hope she fucks David too.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 8 years ago
Great story

Loved how she kept calling him Bubby... Hot!!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 8 years ago
loved it

i liked this storey

jackknife007jackknife007about 8 years ago
Slam Bam

I little too clinical for me. No real seduction or reluctance. More like I'm horny, lets fuck.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 8 years ago
To quick

story moved much to sudden - from start to finish

homerjayhomerjayabout 8 years ago
5 stars

loved it. i hope we'll see part 2 with the three of them. please?

boaman007boaman007about 8 years ago
5 star story

Great story line. Well written and it flowed smoothly. Will we find out what happened with sister's visit?

horny2doithorny2doitabout 8 years ago

Yes, a son screwing his Mom and how it has started is great. Nice story and arousing. Looks like more fun on day 2 of 3 .... now the possibility of screwing his sister will be something else. What he has probably dreamed of doing :) I wonder if his roommates heard Buddy and his Mom going at it ?? Cannot wait for chapter 2. Thanks

SWIM21SWIM21almost 8 years ago
Please keep going

And focus more on their asses. In all your stories the girls have nice big asses, but the main character hardly does anything with them. Also, it would be so hot to hear his Mom make him confess his fantasies about Rachel so she could get in some really sexy dirty talk. I would love to hear her talk about her daughter's body and ask her son all the nasty things he wants to do with it. It's so sexy when women talk about each others' bodies.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 7 years ago
Heisenberg

Walter White's nom de guerre was Heisenberg, with an H, after the famed physicist.

OpenMinded348OpenMinded348about 7 years agoAuthor

Heisenberg. Fack. Knew I shoulda checked. Thanks M8

Sex4lf57Sex4lf57over 6 years ago

I liked the story. Very hot. Just one thing, you put your hands on a person's "waist" not "waste". Get an editor or a proofreader. Just a suggestion.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 3 years ago

Grabbing waste is a totally different thing than a waist a sort of disgusting. If only that wasn’t the only word this hooked on phonics dude managed to spell incorrectly every time. Illiteracy is curable.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 1 year ago

5 stars. I like the story but waste is what you dispose off waist is round your stomach

Been_That_Done_ThereBeen_That_Done_Thereabout 1 year ago

Among many other errors in just the first several paragraphs:

"It was a good photo of her, the weekend that her [she], my sister and I spent in San Diego. She hugged my sister and I [me] close in the photo, both of them in floral bikinis, it was hard to tell who wore them better."

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