All Comments on 'Island of Submission Ch. 01'

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spankfunforspankfunforabout 8 years ago
Arousal Begun!

You Got Me Up And Not Finished! Not Fair! This Is A VERY Great Start!!! Many More Chapters Are Needed!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 8 years ago
More chapters!

This made my pussy so wet..

AnonymousAnonymousabout 8 years ago
Goddamnnnn

Holy fuck I thought I was seconds away from creaming myself!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 8 years ago
Great

Keep it up!

saracelestesaracelesteabout 8 years ago
yes

Lovely descriptions and delicious teasing, please keep writing!

gentleoneexplorergentleoneexplorerabout 8 years ago
More Please

This island of submission would be every Master's dream. The training or at least some of it could be good for new ones to the lifestyle in preparation for their Master. I would really like to read more and see how this Master is treated in the evening. I did notice that one thing that is encouraged is to entice the Master and prolong his encounter for better end results. Masters are in charge and a submissive who intentionally prolonged I would think would face some consequence.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 8 years ago
I am waiting

I am waiting for the next chapter. Please, do not make us wait too long. This is an exciting story.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 8 years ago
Excellent start More Please

Roll on Chapter 2 and any subsequent Chapters

AnonymousAnonymousover 5 years ago
The story looks great

Just the first part and I love it. The way you show de submission of the slaves is beautyful. I will read it to the end .thanks

maddictmaddictalmost 4 years ago

Excellent, as a master I expect to be made comfortable with out asking. Get my dick out and then I can talk and you will listen.

May we have another

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