All Comments on 'Creative Writing'

The tutor was hooked on young student cock was really apparent in your writing. I almost could feel the student enjoying his bliss of excitement/luck.

I really enjoyed reading the story. Hope to read more like it.

Wonderful story. "Taut" instead of "taught" and is she looking for Mr. Goodbar or Mr. Goodman?

Interesting perspective on student/teacher trysts. Student very mature to handle the notion that teacher might have had the occasional other boyfriend, and then, of course, the inevitable end.

This thing a lot of authors do now where they feel they need to start right in the action when we know nothing about the characters, then flash back or forward or sideways or whatever later to explain everything... I find that overplayed and annoying. But your descriptions are great and after I got the whole picture, I am left pretty satisfied. You get a good grade on this assignment, student.

Perfect !

Classy, sexy teacher student story. Very well done.

I really cared about the characters. I wanted them to end up together, but then it would have been in Romance. Keep up the good work!

I presume you're a published writer. This story was excellent. Very well written. Convincing. Smart. Brilliant.

Well written - no, beautifully written! Thank you and don't stop!

Perfect, loved it.

Mr. Matthews, for an English writer, you should know how "Envelope" has 2 E's.