All Comments on 'Carol'

by AnonFreak68

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 8 years ago

lame!!!!!!!!!

AverygoodlayAverygoodlayabout 8 years ago
WHY?

Had a good story going then fucked it up with the Anal sex!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 8 years ago
Lame

So much potential...and you wasted it

AnonFreak68AnonFreak68about 8 years agoAuthor
Guys guys guys! (or girls?)

I know I knida messed up in the last bit, but hopefully i'll get to fix that in the second part.

Please excuse me. This is my first story, and I AM BOUND to make mistakes :P

AnonFreak68AnonFreak68about 8 years agoAuthor
Okay...Sooo

I edited the story a day ago and the updated version is up.

No more disgusting stuff :p

So read it again and tell me if that changes everything....

grabmyballsgrabmyballsabout 8 years ago
Nice Story

I just don't know what all these other comments are on about.

OseekerOseeker9 months ago

Kinda juvenile but also close to being arousing...

3 stars

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