All Comments on 'Fitness Model Moms Ch. 03'

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Kookaburra8Kookaburra8about 8 years ago
You did it again

I'm lost for words , thank you for given us this amazing story . 5 stars ++++

Daniel32Daniel32about 8 years ago
Hot story!***** but...

You wrote a really hot story here. Then I read your bio on your home page. Only bigots and racists think that a loving interracial relationship is taboo. Keep writing tho! Thx for the read! :-)

AnonymousAnonymousabout 8 years ago
Great story

I loved this story. There is no greater love than a mother and son,s love, especially when mommy spreads her thighs and surrenders that final form of love to her loving son. If more mothers would follow this path sons would have no need to date or marry another woman and move out. His mothers womb was his home for nine months and for many men they desire to return to their mothers womb each night and fill it with their seed to complete their life's calling. I love that this loving mother has accepted the role of her son's wife and allows his to climb on top of her body each night and thrust away on her unprotected womb until he fills her with his seed. How many men read this and were inveious of this young stud, moving into his mothers bedroom to take his rightful place as his mothers lover, to have his mommy surrender her womb to him night after night. This son no longer has to jerk his own cock, or search out massage parlor to releive the tension in his balls. No this lucky son has a loving mother to rub and suck his cock until it is hard as stone, then mommy welcomes her young studs hard cock into her warm-wet pussy and whispers dirty words into as he thrusts in pleasure over and over in carnal pleasure. As the ultimate act of love mommy allows her son to fill her with his seed. I hope in future stories we find out if this mommy son couple allow this son the ultimate pleasure of turning mommy into a grandma as mommy gives her son a baby. I would love to read about this young stud hammering away on his mothers pussy while holding her milk laden breasts and looking at her pregnant belly. What a great story 5 stars from me

AnonymousAnonymousabout 8 years ago
I agree with the anon who wrote "great story" 95%

Anon's contribution is heartfelt and truly eloquent, and twh's story is indeed great, five stars from me as well. My fellow fan is convincing in describing the unparalleled excitement of a son reentering the same cunt he came out of--his mother's, his mom's, his own mommy's! warm beautiful ever-loving cunt. The feeling of a son as he slides his fat young cock up his own birth canal, his mother's glorious twat, must be toes-curdling, and when he blows his balls and shoots mom a huge twatful of creamy semen he must feel like the king of the world. The idea that readers are envious of the story's hero is spot on--I sure am. Fucking my own dear mommy--oh, man! My one small disagreement is on the statement, "If more mothers would follow this path sons would have no need to date or marry another woman and move out." The more moms who spread their chubby thighs for their baby boy the better. But baby boy should be free to lead a normal conventional life, returning to the magical hairy hole he was born from for another hot incestuous fuck as the spirit moves him and his beloved mom.

Comentarista82Comentarista82about 8 years ago
Loved...

..the constantly getting interrupted before Monica could say who he was. Funny and a cute detail! :)

Nice progression in their relationship, since it wasn't wham-bam, but a plausible build-up. Loved how they spent time together, at least how she involved him. And who wouldn't love to dance with a woman with long curly hair?

Loved it. Easily a 5.

Ernest HemingsexErnest Hemingsexabout 8 years ago
Loved it!

The death of a girlfriend, while a tad dark, is a great way for a mother and son to get together. This is a new one for me. The closest I read was Girlfriend caught cheating; Mom "consoles" Son and they become a couple.

I could feel Monica's love for her son--both conventional and non-conventional. I thought her saying she could love him like a mother and wife was superb! I loved that they got "married." Great work! 5 *s!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 8 years ago

Yes, well written and certainly Great too !! Wish we could hear more of what they branch out to. Hot and arousing. Shows a lot of courage and love too. Thanks.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 8 years ago
OK BUT,,,,,,,,,,,,

WHERE'S THE PREGNANCY?

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 8 years ago
You're going to make me cum Dean!

"Oh god Dean, your cock perfect for me," Monica told him as he pounded her in missionary position. "Harder baby, give it to me good," she moaned loudly! "Oh yes Dean, oh yes, that's it, just like that," Monica exclaimed! As her son's cock pounded her pussy like a jack-hammer, her orgasm began. "Oh god yes, oh Dean, oh Dean," she yelled.! "Oh honey, oh honey, oh yes baby, fuck me, fuck me," Monica shouted! "I'm cumming, oh god, I'm cumming Dean, uh, uh, uh, uh, Aaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa," she shouted at the top of her lungs!!!

billybudd42000billybudd42000almost 8 years ago
Truly engaging story.

A real builder of a story opening with a tragedy to an ending of love and wonderfully descriptive sex. Not seen storytelling approached in this way. Congratulations.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 7 years ago
WOW

Fucking your mother is one thing being her husband is another! Just continue to get that pussy and be done with it

goducks1goducks1over 5 years ago
5 stars

great sexy read. i like long teases - but this one seemed a little predictable - but the sex was great as was the story. it was a fun read!!

Foxterot7aFoxterot7aover 2 years ago

One of the most beautiful, passionate, sensual and intimate love stories I have read. The development of the major character was good. Although different, the shared sorrow of the mother and son and the depth of their respective effort to over come their respective adversity was filled with respect, compassion and maturity. A true mother's love has no boundaries. The maturity and openness of the son was beautiful. As a romantic, the depth of effort, caring, passion and sexual intimacy was almost spiritual. To the author: Chapter 1 and Chapter 3 could not have been written by the same person who wrote Chapter 2. If it was, I am glad that your health has improved and hope you can continue write.

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