All Comments on 'The Bird Returns Ch. 03'

by TheDurangoKid

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 8 years ago
come on

I do not know how these authors of these kind of stories think this is exciting, I think that these kind of stories are in very poor taste, I am only reading this because I want to find out if Carla comes to her senses and releases her aunt jo, the only good part of this is that she did help her lose the weight, but that is the only good part

AnonymousAnonymousabout 8 years ago
Enduring and embracing the torture

Holy mother of god...what hot scenes! Women who know they are beautiful playing on the dark side. Aroused by the hours of extreme pain they are subjecting another woman's bare cunt to. Fuckkkkkkk!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 8 years ago
Ditch the puppy

Great stories, but for my tastes would rather see Brittany turn Virginia into a bimbo fuckdoll. Much hotter than a pet. It's all about transforming women into sexually charged and accepting women. Plus fuckdolls and sluts make me hot.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 8 years ago
How soon to

Chapter 4, doesn't Virginia's body need to be made fit and be coustomized as Jo and Carla's- maybe some erotic tattooing for all three.

AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago
more stories

I reread the hole story again. wish there were more stories continuation.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 7 years ago
Do you plan to finish?

I would like to see how it ends.

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